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Today’s prompt – Heaven in her eyes
My Submission:
When she smiled, her eyes shrunk to slits.
Yet, they still managed to illuminate a room.
They lit my heart on fire on our first date.
Every time she smiled, I smiled.
I couldn’t help it.
That smile, which slivered her eyes, was contagious.
I thought I saw heaven.
We began dating.
She was sweet, doting, selfless and full of passion.
And when I looked into her hazel eyes,
I thought I saw heaven.
Then, something changed.
She turned cruel, callous, unkind.
Even though she donned the same smile,
The light in her eyes began to fade.
They became dark, ominous, conniving.
Though I once believed in heaven,
I’m not so sure anymore.
Relax, It's all Write 
Good take on the prompt Sara.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Good one Sara
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I appreciate that, Di 🙂
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🙂
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People change. Sometimes we realise that we never really knew the real version of them. Great take, Sara!
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Exactly what I intended to communicate! Thanks a lot, Shweta!
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Sara, I read your submission earlier today when I did not have the photo. I greatly enjoy your post, yet it makes even more sense when I see the photo. You describe well how a person, a relationship can change.
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Or, how you didn’t know the real them in the first place! Thanks for reading 🙂
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This is very good!
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Thank you so much!
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great take on the prompt and you really depicted change – ((and hope you are having a nice month of July))
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Thank you 🙂
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The eyes show so much. We only need to be brave enough to look deep into them…
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