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My Submission, 200 words:
For three days, she would look over and see the silhouette of a hand on the piece of fabric separating them. At first, it frightened her. She was already feeling vulnerable, laying in her hospital bed, not knowing who or what was on the other side of the sheet.
Private rooms were no longer available. So, as much as she desired privacy after her surgery, there was no choice but to have a roommate.
She hadn’t heard a single peep from her neighbour. All she saw was their hand. Every day. For three days.
A nurse came into the room, visited her neighbour, then came to her. “Emily,” she said, “can I show you something?”
Emily nodded, and the nurse held up a whiteboard.
“He lost the ability to speak, but would like to say something to you.”
Emily took the whiteboard and read what her neighbour had written: You have a very kind voice. I don’t have any family here and could really use the comfort of a friend.
Emily looked over and saw his hand placed against the fabric once again.
“Pull the curtain,” she said.
The nurse did, and Emily grabbed his hand and squeezed it tightly.
Such a warm gesture — especially in a hospital, when that compassion is very beneficial.
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Thank you so much, Dave
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Loved it 😃
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So pleased you enjoyed it!
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Oh Sara, this is wonderful.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A beautiful, heartwarming story Sara
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Thank you, Sadje 🙂
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You’re welcome my dear
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