- Find the muse within the photo or line provided and follow where it leads. It can be a story, anecdote, poem. Anything!
- The Story must be between 50 and 250 words, in 50 word increments. (so 50, 100, 150, 200 or 250 words)
- Link back to this post with the tag 50WordThurs so that everyone can find it, or post your response in the comments below.
The words: “Cowards”, Ida Belle yelled out the front door. – Louisiana Longshot – Jana DeLeon
Here is my submission – 200 words 🙂
Walking into the house, we didn’t know what to expect. We heard she was a hoarder, so we prepared ourselves for at least some conflict. Ida Belle was nice, at first. She made us tea from a rusted kettle on her maggot-ridden stove. We politely declined.
“We’re just here to do a job,” I assured her.
“What job? To rid a poor old woman of her life’s accomplishments?”
I looked around. Nothing but trash, up to the ceiling in some areas. And the stench…otherworldly.
A rat ran across my foot.
“Don’t mind him,” said Ida Belle, “that’s Bartholomew.”
Another darted along the windowsill.
“How many rats do you have?” I ask.
“At least a hundred.”
“And you named them all?”
She scoffed. “Do you not name your pets?”
“But, I think you need an exterminator before the clean-up.”
The look on her face was like Sophie’s Choice.
“We’ll return once you get this infestation under control.”
“How DARE you call my babies an infestation!” she hollered.
I did feel bad for her as we packed up and made our way outside.
“Cowards,” Ida Belle yelled out the front door as we drove away.
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